casual corner

[sarafinamable]

sometimes i think this place is just a casual corner for the kids on the street and thats what makes me hate it
red-in-the-face
steaming-at-the-ears
foaming-at-the-mouth kinda pissed

then i remember that maybe i'm just a kid on the street to others and maybe my presence here is unwelcomed as well
or at least i used to be, if i'm not now.

now i'm just a regular

domination was my ulitmate goal, i remember, once i look back before i even came to this place

but more and more i keep feeling like there is nothing here that will take me anywhere and i'm laughing inside at the pathetic patches of life formed by these "kids" and i'm hoping that no one thinks that I am a pathetic patch of life: urging and pushing, with mighty strength to break free of this outer layer that makes my ideas niave and precious

i do not want precious ideas
i want ideas
real-solid-people thinking
kind of ideas
and i want feedback
honest-clear-representative feedback

but then i realize that this is just a casual corner for the kids on the street and if i stay here i'll just be one of those middle aged moms hitting on my son's friends.

thats a pathetic patch of life. not worth this casual corner
b/c i have ideas



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[Hannibal]

Hmmmm.....
this one ... well, I felt like you walked us through it okay, but that was about it... you gave us kinda patchy/sketchy ideas, covered with stuff that really didn't include a whole lot of anything... *am I making any sense?*
I guess what I'm saying is, it just didn't flow as well as others you've written.
It seemed very "clunky" if you will.

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[sarafinamable]

i guess you got the feeling that i was "walking you through it" b/c i was. this was more a train of thought that was spilling out onto the keyboard. maybe it didn't "flow" as well, but i just kinda think that it is different, and after i was done and i read it i had the feeling that this was applicable to so many people in different places, thats why i like this one.


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"this is life not heaven, you don't have to be perfect."
Gia
"Our love was comfortable and so broken in"
John Mayer
http://www.onemoredrink.moonfruit.com
First Name Basis is a great, little known band (so far), check out their website